Wednesday 26 September 2018

Adventure writing

On Wednesday I went into the fort and I had an adventure in the ditch with Deegan. The fort has heaps of leaves and green trees and sticks and bamboo sticks. It has a forest  like the scary woods because it is dark and it has shadows. It has a Fort Care Code and some stuff that is on it is “don't pull on the plants that are growing” and “digging only in the sand pit”. Sometimes we find huts and people to play with and to have fun with. It is fun inside the fort because it has heaps of steep hills and places to have an adventure and has obstacles that you have to go over and  under.

3 comments:

  1. hi Xanthe I like your adventure writing it is very good i like how you told us what to do in the fort.

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  2. Hi Xanthe I think your adventure writing was very good because you describe the fort.

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  3. good job i like your drawing and writing.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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